Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

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Nature is the most wonderful thing in the world. But nowadays the beauty of nature is being destroyed by the several activities of humans. It led to the disappearance of so many

species

. The following essay will discuss the certain reasons behind

this

and will suggest some solutions to solve

this

issue.

To begin

with the causes, primarily the development of regions results in the destructions of different kinds of trees.

For example

, while the population increases, people are making houses by demolishing forest areas and they are seeking to find a place to stay.

Moreover

, other buildings

such

as offices, business

centers

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centres

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, or shopping malls are increasing day by day with the cut of trees and other landscapes.

Thus

, a variety of birds have to lose their nest and become less in number. The Haast's eagle,

for instance

, becomes extinct because its food source becomes extinct. Over-exploitation of

species

for human use

such

as hunting food

also

are the reasons. An obvious solution for

this

is, to prevent deforestation and soil erosion. To illustrate

this

, now people are collecting soil from the riverside.

Hence

, the trees will destroy the food source, as well as the shelter of so many

species

, are losing. So government should take proper actions to avoid

such

conditions and

furthermore

, humans should aware of the causes of future damages like global warming and all. So that they can be keen on forest conservation and animal protection. To recapitulate, bio-diversity is the basic with a stand of every living

species

However

, if individuals do not provide much prominence to it causes not only damage to animals and birds but

also

human beings. So to conserve the ecosystem is the responsibility of each one.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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11Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

287 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

habitat destruction
deforestation
urbanization
overexploitation
climate change
pollution
invasive species
conservation
sustainable practices
greenhouse gas emissions
ecosystems
species population
genetic diversity
environmental awareness
protected areas

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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