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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

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More than any time in history, nations will be dealing with serious issues regarding the environment, their inhabitant and their educational system. The purpose of
this
 essay is to look at some possible
problems
 that I feel might occur and explore some measures to mitigate them. Perhaps, the main problem that I believe can be seen in the
next
 decade is directly related to education. As being an educator is not valued these days, fewer and fewer people are deciding to follow
this
 career,
hence
, there will be fewer
professors
 in the future.
In addition
, there are environmental
problems
 that we have been facing over the
years
, in which the population is suffering from water floods and extremely high temperatures, to name a few. To illustrate
such
 an event, the city of Ottawa, in 2021, experienced the highest temperature mark over the
last
 45
years
.
However
, there are some actions that can be taken to alleviate these
problems
. To address the lack of
professors
 in the future, governments should invest more in education by giving better salaries to educators,
hence
, more people will be interested in
this
 career.
Such
 action has been done successfully in Australia and Canada. These countries faced
this
 challenge
years
 ago, and now have
professors
 as the
second
 high paid salary in their country. To deal with the environmental challenge, stronger laws and fines should be put in place to mitigate the constant attack on the planet. In conclusion, the main
problems
 that our nation will face in the
next
 ten
years
 are climate change due to issues with the environment and the decrease in the number of
professors
. To solve
this
 strong laws and monetary incentives to teachers are some of the actions that can be put in place.
Although
 the
problems
 are unlikely to be entirely solved, there are concrete steps to reduce the effects they will have in the future society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Ecosystem
  • Renewable resources
  • Urbanization
  • Demographics
  • Healthcare system
  • Pension crisis
  • Curriculum development
  • Digital literacy
  • E-learning platforms
  • Lifelong learning
  • Public policy
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Green technology
  • Population density
  • Generational equity
  • Economic disparity
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