some people believe that studying at university or college is the best rout to a successful career, while other believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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debatable
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a debatable
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issue that getting
education
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an education
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from university or college is the great route to a successful career .
Although
a section of society asserts that it 's better to get
job
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a job
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after school , I believe that it is beneficial to get
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an eduction
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eduction
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education
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from university or college. On the one hand , some type of knowledge we are not able to get from the school only .
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, in
schools
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we learn more about theoretical than practical knowledge.
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, college and university we develop our skills which enhance our capabilities
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
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