Some people think computer games have negative impacts on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that a myriad of teenagers has been affected by
computer
games
. I totally agree that teens are addicted to these
games
and have an adverse impact on their life.
First
of all, due to virtual diversion, there is a drastic decrease in physical activities like outdoor
games
.
Although
spending a lot of time before the system
that is
resting whole day on the chair, couch or even in bed might cause
health
issues. Because there is no work is done by our body parts, after all, playing outdoor
games
tends to make them run, jump and giggle
this
all activities make the organs to function well and there will be no severe
health
issues at teenage.
For example
, a Times report says that more than 55% of students have medical problems like eye vision, back and leg pain and it is increasing enormously day by day.
Hence
playing
computer
games
will have severe
health
concerns
this
is caused due to reduction in physical activities.
Secondly
, Violence oriented
games
have an adverse effect on children in mental condition,
Consequently
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there is a change in perception and thinking which drag them away from involvement with friends and family.
This
always keep them to stay alone and they like more privacy and
this
will cause depression and other mental trauma. After ,all
this
situation haunts them dangerously and pushes them to psychological harassment and suicidal thoughts.
For example
, a few years ago, a game called Blue Whale has affected many children mental stability and caused deaths too.
This
is because ,at an unmatured age, they don't know what is wrong and right.
Therefore
,
computer
games
have damaged relationships socially and
also
caused mental trauma. To conclude ,
computer
games
are not only affecting physically by
also
mentally
this
impact may cause severe
health
issues and even death.
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