Home Schooling has become very popular in recent years. However, most people still believe that attending schools is the best way to obtain formal education. What are the advantages and disadvantages of home-schooling?

Nowadays,
school
at
home
is a very popular
option
to
study
than attending schools;
however
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some people believe that attending
school
is the best
option
for academic education. The main benefits of
home schooling
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homeschooling
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are being able to
study
at
home
and creating
stronger
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relationship
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relationships
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with
parents
;
however
, the drawbacks are lack of social skills and isolation.
First
, with
home schooling
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, the
students
will be able to stay at
home
and get knowledge without attending
school
in person. There are some diseases that impede some
students
to attend
school
in person and
this
home
school
is a
conveneint
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convenient
option
to continue with the education.
Hence
, the pupils do not have to stop their
esucation
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education
because of physical impediment. The
second
advantage is that tutoring at
home
will help to create
a better relations
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better relations
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withing
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within
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parents
and
children
by supporting them with the
assigments
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assignments
assignment
.
For instance
,
students
who
study
at
home
usually
study
behind the screen, so usually
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there are many difficulties to
complete
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the task
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task
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because of the complexity of the instructions.
However
,
parents
might help their
children
by getting in contact with the tutors and
find
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together the proper help.
As a result
, the
students
might feel
secured
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and loved by their
parents
.
This
is what I think the disadvantages are:
to begin
, lack of skills is very often to
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among
children
who
study
home
education. It is difficult to keep in touch with other
children
if the
students
are not attending
school
in person.
Therefore
,
children
lose physical contact and the ability to start a normal conversation.
Moreover
, it is easy that these
students
feel isolated because they work so many hours with the
comouter
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computer
that there
are
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no
opportunity
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opportunities
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for leisure time. It is easy
the
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student
feel
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confused if they are working at
home
, on weekday or weekends, so there
are
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no difference between
sshool
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school
time or recess time.
For example
, during the covid-19 pandemic Harvard university's
study
proved that
children
who decided
stay
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at
home
tend to suffer from depression
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and
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an
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and
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anxiety.
Besides
, most of these young adults tend to gain more weight. To conclude, during
this
global pandemic,
home
school
is a very popular
option
for many
students
beacuse
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because
it provide comfort and the opportunity to improve relationships with their loved ones;
however
,
the
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disadvantages
such
a
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depression and anxiety are very common in these
children
.
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