Nowadays,many individuals tend to commute when they are free from work like weekends as well as getting bored,but many
people
believe that commuting with friends is far better than going solitary.In my view,travelling with other
people
ensures ample benefits.
this
essay will discuss both statements.
To
on,going with a team of
people
facilitates entertainment and reduce the boredom like we can talk the whole journey.
secondly
,there is a chance to play games
such
as cards and ludo in order
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we can pass the time easily.
moreover
,sometimes it gives us strength and confidence,so we do not have to
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by seeing
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.
additionally
,we can watch a movie together through the mobile phone.
for instance
,during my summer vacation,I went to one famous temple by
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train with my friends.I did a lot of
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with her company by seeing
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nature through window .it was my best memory in my life,
therefore
travelling with someone enables safety and caring.
On another side,as far as
concerned, staying at home is better than travelling alone
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because it is dangerous
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if we commute alone and something happened to us
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a small accident
then
nobody going to assist us,
therefore
it leads to
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issue.
in addition
to,there are no enjoyment and
.
for example
,recently my friend
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gone to
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bus for groceries.unfortunately,she got a heart attack in her middle way nobody was with her after some time volunteers came and took her to hospital,but
finally
she died.actually,I mean to say that travelling with a group of
people
is very imperative.
To conclude,many individuals have
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which
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from person to person,
therefore
they decide whether commuting a team of
people
is
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or going alone is
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.going with other
people
facilitates more benefits than commuting alone.