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Sending money on government should spend money on railways rather than roads to what extent do you agree?

#money #government #railways #roads
it is often argued that it is more advantages to give more budget to railways authorities by government rather than two
roads
 I completely agree with
opinion
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 and think that
railway's
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railways
railway
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 are more important factors to improve their facilities and need more amount of money
first
 of all
railway
's are covered less space and
easily
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are easily
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 connected through the difficult routes
however
roads
 required whitespace and specific area to be built and are not attached easily in various tropical regions in most of the areas
railway
's are not properly built and
roads
demands
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 huge amount and maintenance for
complete
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 process
for example
 in many parts of the world there are
evidences
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 most of you
per use
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peruse
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 train services more than other public transport
Secondly
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railway
's had connected many countries despite
of
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their disputed border it shows
railway
's
also
 supplied a peace and happiness to word neighbouring cities and countries
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for instance
 India has recently opened their new
railway
 route with the help of governments towards Pakistan
that is
 why it is important to spend budget on
railway's
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the railway's
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 for the country development to conclude I strongly believe that government should spend more budget on
railway
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the railway
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 than
roads
 because it makes
contribution
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a contribution
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 towards
development
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the development
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 of
country
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the country
a country
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