As we are facing more and more problems which affect the whole planet, good relationships between different countries are becoming more important than ever before. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is clear that the earth is dealing with plenty of issues these days.
Therefore
, some people argue that the quality of the relationship that nations
possess between
each other is playing an Change preposition
with
ever increasing
role. Add a hyphen
ever-increasing
This
essay agrees with this
view and will first
discuss that the more close countries are, the most positive impact on environmental issues can be achieved, and secondly
, it will claim that international trading is easier between brothers nations
.
To begin
with, as a greater number of countries gather together, there is more likely to curb climate change harms to the earth. This
is because as more governments from different regions of the planet join, more money would be available. Therefore
, there would be a better infraestructure
to curb Correct your spelling
infrastructure
the
global warming and Correct article usage
apply
thus
the avoidance of weather related
issues Add a hyphen
weather-related
such
as flooding or hurricans
. Correct your spelling
hurricanes
hurricane
For example
, Chile, Argentina and Brasil have successfully prevented flooding in Buenos Aires due to the fact that they had worked together in building a big dam and a huge flood barrier.
On the other hand
, there is no doubt that nations
that make effective relationships improve trading. The amount of products imported and exported between nations
is incredible greater when they became brotherhoods. As a consequence, people are able to obtain a lot of items straightforwardly from another regions
on a daily basis. Replace the adjective
another region
other regions
Thus
the global market increases in value. To illustrate this
, Puerto Rico and Guatemala made a trade contract and nowadays everyone from either nation can enjoy the products from the other one.
To conclude, although
in modern times the globe is at risk of serious problems, the gathering between nations
is paramount to increase profits in order to prevent catastrophes. On top of that, more countries together can enhance the trading of products.Submitted by ghorivinas64 on
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