As we are facing more and more problems which affect the whole planet, good relationships between different countries are becoming more important than ever before. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is clear that the earth is dealing with plenty of issues these days.

Therefore

, some people argue that the quality of the relationship that

nations

possess

between

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each other is playing an

ever increasing

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role.

This

essay agrees with

this

view and will

first

discuss that the more close countries are, the most positive impact on environmental issues can be achieved, and

secondly

, it will claim that international trading is easier between brothers

nations

.

To begin

with, as a greater number of countries gather together, there is more likely to curb climate change harms to the earth.

This

is because as more governments from different regions of the planet join, more money would be available.

Therefore

, there would be a better

infraestructure

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infrastructure

to curb

the

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global warming and

thus

the avoidance of

weather related

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issues

such

as flooding or

hurricans

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hurricanes

hurricane

.

For example

, Chile, Argentina and Brasil have successfully prevented flooding in Buenos Aires due to the fact that they had worked together in building a big dam and a huge flood barrier.

On the other hand

, there is no doubt that

nations

that make effective relationships improve trading. The amount of products imported and exported between

nations

is incredible greater when they became brotherhoods. As a consequence, people are able to obtain a lot of items straightforwardly from

another regions

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on a daily basis.

Thus

the global market increases in value. To illustrate

this

, Puerto Rico and Guatemala made a trade contract and nowadays everyone from either nation can enjoy the products from the other one. To conclude,

although

in modern times the globe is at risk of serious problems, the gathering between

nations

is paramount to increase profits in order to prevent catastrophes. On top of that, more countries together can enhance the trading of products.