Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Improving the
environment
is as important as having
next
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generation. We produce offspring to the world so that they continue
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humanity while we show no love towards the so-called Mother-Earth. Taking care of the
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,
such
as improving the
environment
, is neither just for one
people
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person
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nor
a
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organization.
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a
responsibilty
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responsibility
for all
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mankind
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, individually. Individuals can do nothing to improve the
environment
cause only governments and large
companies
can make a difference. I partially agreed
to
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this
statement. One of the
reason
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is that
people
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tend
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tent
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tend
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to be selfish and stay in
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comfort
confort
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zone carelessly. There are a few
number of
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people
who actually care about the
environment
and started taking action example, by using reusable straws, paper bags,
recycleable
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recyclable
cans and bottles
instead
of plastic ones but
majority
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of the
people
are still using plastic straws, bags, cans and bottles ,
hence
there is little to no improvement in the
environment
.
Thus
governments including
the
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large
companies
should stand by the minority. The question is " How ?". The answer
is learn
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from
Singaporian
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Singapore
. The way the governments encourage its
people
and the large
companies
to
use
eco-friendly
products
. Even if they wanted to
use
non-eco-friendly
products
, they couldn't due to the high taxes and an
incredible
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large amount of fines.
On the other hand
, the large
companies
advertise
people
to
use
eco-friendly
products
by showing sea and land animals suffer from pollution. Due to sympathy,
people
started to
use
eco-friendly
products
in order to save animals and those who couldn't
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sympathise
sympathize
also
started using eco-friendly
products
due to
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amount of fines. In conclusion, to improve the
environment
not only
peopel
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people
should do
individually
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it individually
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but
also
governements
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governments
and large
companies
should
invlove
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involve
involved
in it to be more effective and more successful.
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  • environmental awareness
  • sustainable practices
  • renewable energy
  • carbon footprint
  • waste reduction
  • conservation
  • ecosystem
  • pollution
  • climate change
  • responsibility
  • leadership
  • legislation
  • investment
  • collaboration
  • systemic change
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