Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, but other people think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen at TV and the internet. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

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It is said that travelling makes humans more independent and confident in life as it increases the human's knowledge as well as it
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enables to know about different cultures.Here are two schools of thought.
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states it's better to
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overseas and get to know about the country whereas others argue that it is better to use the internet and televisions.
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, travelling abroad not only gives you the experience of overseas but
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an experience of the cultural difference apart from
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we even get to know a lot about how things function in different places.
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, In developing ,countries hotels use humans in the restaurants for taking an order but in developed ,countries they have started using robots.In order to have
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cannot access it over the internet. ,
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each country has its own climate and weather which can only be experienced in life by going to that place
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a person cannot feel and enjoy snowfall on television. On the flip, It is not financially possible for everyone to
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to different nations for the sake of enjoyment or to gain knowledge.
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can definitely use the internet to know about a particular place.
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, If a person wants to know about the Taj Mahal it is not mandatory to
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and visit the place he can get everything, the Taj Mahal, with
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click.
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, apart from financial ,aspect even some health issues or elderliness may restrict them from moving out of their homes in
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case television can play a major role in showing them on the screen and satisfying them to some extent. To conclude, It depends on
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to character and various other factors whether he should
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so far or surf about it over the web. In my opinion, If an individual can afford and is it to
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the that would be better than watching it over the screen.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • immersive
  • interactions
  • virtual means
  • cultural nuances
  • language acquisition
  • problem-solving
  • adaptability
  • sustainability
  • virtual tours
  • documentaries
  • sophisticated
  • realistic representations
  • comprehensive understanding
  • financial status
  • carbon footprint
  • digital resources
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