Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, but other people think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen at TV and the internet. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
It is said that travelling makes humans more independent and confident in life as it increases the human's knowledge as well as it
also
enables to know about different cultures.Here are two schools of thought. One
states it's better to travel
overseas and get to know about the country whereas others argue that it is better to use the internet and televisions. This
writes up will discuss both the views and give an opinion at the end.
Firstly
, travelling abroad not only gives you the experience of overseas but also
an experience of the cultural difference apart from this
we even get to know a lot about how things function in different places. For instance
, In developing ,countries hotels use humans in the restaurants for taking an order but in developed ,countries they have started using robots.In order to have such
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one
cannot access it over the internet. ,Additionally
each country has its own climate and weather which can only be experienced in life by going to that placeAdd a comma
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, for example,
for example
a person cannot feel and enjoy snowfall on television.
On the flip, It is not financially possible for everyone to travel
to different nations for the sake of enjoyment or to gain knowledge. One
can definitely use the internet to know about a particular place. For example
, If a person wants to know about the Taj Mahal it is not mandatory to travel
and visit the place he can get everything, the Taj Mahal, with one
click. Additionally
, apart from financial ,aspect even some health issues or elderliness may restrict them from moving out of their homes in this
case television can play a major role in showing them on the screen and satisfying them to some extent.
To conclude, It depends on character
to character and various other factors whether he should Add an article
a character
the character
travel
so far or surf about it over the web. In my opinion, If an individual can afford and is it to travel
the that would be better than watching it over the screen.Submitted by koushvenkat on
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