Human activities have a negative effect on plant and animal species. Some people say that it is too late to do anything. Some people think that we should take effective action to improve the situation. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Nowadays, humankind realises that nature was been destroyed a lot by humankind
actions
. Some people believe that is
too late to do actions
for nature and some people say we still can make efforts to protect the world
. In my opinion, I believe that we are still can do some actions
to protect our world
. This
essay will discuss both views and some examples to enhance my view.
On the one hand, many creature
are been Change to a plural noun
creatures
extinction
due to human's activities. when the Replace the word
extinct
world
become civilization, humans hunting
animals, which took part of their Wrong verb form
hunted
body
to sell or make the specimen, Fix the agreement mistake
bodies
such
as dodo birds. Dodo birds face to
the hunt Change preposition
apply
only
a century, they are ceased to exist; Change preposition
for only
therefore
, that is
too late to do any actions
.
On other hand
, some flora and Change the wording
another hand
other hands
creature
are Fix the agreement mistake
creatures
in
Change preposition
on
edge
of extinction, the government should create some strategy for them. Authorities can educate their people Add an article
the edge
how
to protect Change preposition
on how
endanger
animals and plants and Change the form of the verb
endangered
building
the law to avoid Wrong verb form
build
endanger
Wrong verb form
endangered
creature
Fix the agreement mistake
creatures
to be
hunted by Change the verb form
being
Add an article
a hunter
the hunter
hunter
. Fix the agreement mistake
hunters
For example
, recent
days, schools teach us about Change preposition
in recent
endanger
species in books, we all know hunting them is illegal. Change the form of the verb
endangered
Moreover
, some zoos breed and gaud endanger species such
as panda, which is famous and derived from the in China. They
Correct your spelling
The
farming
and protect them Wrong verb form
farm
avoid
death. Fix the infinitive
to avoid
This
is a positive way for action.
To sum up, some animals and plants are not in the world
any more
, but we still have many Correct your spelling
anymore
endanger
species Change the form of the verb
endangered
need
us to protect them.Correct pronoun usage
that need
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite