Having a good university degree guarantees people a good job. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

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effect

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taking a high paid employment. I strongly disagree with

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opinion .

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essay will

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look at how ordinary people without tertiary education succeed in

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progression and how individual qualities affect

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our

job

. The main reason why I disagree with

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statement is that

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degree only provides theoretical or can say enhance an individual knowledge, but practical training makes a person robust and capable in that way alumnus ready to face the challenges in the workplace.

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, in the medical field,

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pass

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with a good percentage which makes

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to get a good

job

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,

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sphere ,

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they can not save

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. Another reason which

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to

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into consideration is that one of the core important skill everywhere is confidence, and

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skill a person does not get from a

university

degree. If an individual does not have

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confidence,

then

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does not have

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to communicate as well as fail to explain ideas ,

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makes raise

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of losses

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job

.

Moreover

, logical thinking is

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one of the significant skills for taking

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. Employers

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check every candidate before taking

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, employers check how employers handle a problematic situation. In conclusion, it is advisable to enhance the individual communication skills since

university

gives only

a basic theoretical knowledge

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about your speciality being that every company appreciate your thinking and abilities to get out in different situations.