You have gained admission in a prestigious college. Now you have to arrange for the accommodation. write a letter to the college authorities stating your likes and dislike in the choice of food and accommodation.

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epistle to apprise you about my preference for accommodation and food .

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month, I enrolled for an Intensive English course for Travel in your reputation college. My classes are going to start in the upcoming week so I will travel to your institution from my hometown. I would prefer to stay in the college residence hall. I would like a single room either on the ground floor or the

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floor with the air conditioner and attached bathroom. It would be better if laundry facilities is

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available.

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, a room in the practical area is most preferable as I can concentrate on my study there.

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, I am vegetarian and would like to know if our college canteen is vegetarian friendly. I would like a nutritious diet that must contain green vegetables , multi-grain flour and less oily foods. Hope you will consider my preferences and provide the required services. Thank you in anticipation. Yours faithfully 29 October, 21 Ritu Dhiman

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

167 words

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