The road in front of your house got damaged a long ago and nothing has been done about it. Write a letter to the municipal authority complaining about the damaged road. In your letter: introduce yourself explain the condition of the road and suggest what they should do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I trust you are doing well. The purpose of
this
letter is to express my dissatisfaction with the City Council's ability to take the initiative to repair the road in front of my house.
First and foremost, myself Ruchin Patel resident of southern Toronto where I have been living at the Dundas and Bathurst intersection for over two decades.
My house is just a few steps away from the intersection and the road between that distance got damaged during the construction work Linking Words
last
year. There are now many deep Linking Words
pot holes
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potholes
as well as
visible cracks which are causing traffic congestion and making it unsafe to drive. Linking Words
Due to
that, municipal engineers have visited a few times but nothing has been done to repair the path.
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Therefore
, I am urging you to take all necessary steps to get approval on the budget immediately. Linking Words
Last
but not least, please notify city dwellers to be extra cautious Linking Words
while
using the road.
I hope that you understand my concerns and get the work done soon.
Thank you.
Yours faithfully,
Ruchin PatelLinking Words
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To enhance coherence, ensure a smooth transition between the introduction, details of the problem, and your suggestions.
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Add more specific positive outcomes if the repair is done to strengthen your argument.
coherence cohesion
The letter opens with a clear introduction and a greeting, establishing the purpose of writing effectively.
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The tone of the letter is formal and respectful, which is appropriate for addressing municipal authority.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite