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The problem of Juvenile delinquency is increasing day by day. What do you that can be reasons ? What would you Prefer, counselling or imprisonment.

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Nowadays, illegal behaviour by minors is rising gradually. An array of society believes that imprisonment is the possible solution whereas others think that counselling is the better way to handle
this
 situation. I prefer counselling and will discuss
this
 in the upcoming paragraphs. Commencing with, one chief reason is
parents
 do not have
time
 for supervising their childrens'
activities
 which results in moving towards the wrong path. To quote an instance , kids do not have an understanding of right and wrong so it is the responsibility of guardians to teach about these things but due to lack of
time
 and indulging with some other work ,items
parents
 do not spend
time
 with their kids.
Furthermore
, they are under peer pressure in school and are forced by their companions to do illegal
activities
 . To exemplify, a few minors take drugs and they
also
 insist their partners take them. Apart from
this
 , the influence of media plays an important role in forcing minors to do illegal
activities
.
For instance
 , nowadays , the singers use different types of weapons in their songs and youth try to do all that in real life Beyond doubt, their mind is very sensitive at
this
 age and they are not in a position to make the right decisions, so they need more attention from their
parents
 and teachers. A parent could teach them good manners since their childhood and kind and firm teaching methods would be proved effective.
Parents
 should keep an eye on their
activities
 and should give them proper counselling from
time
 to
time
. To conclude, blends of factors are responsible for the increase in the illegal
activities
 by youngsters
however
this
 situation could be handled with love , affection and care. By means of , counselling we can make the world safer.
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