many countries aim to improve their living standards by economic development, but some important social values are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages

These days people are getting closer and borders are getting smaller because of

globalization

.

However

, there are some individuals who are worried about losing several social values due to

globalization

. It is undeniable that

globalization

has resulted in both positive and negative effects which must be addressed

accordingly

in

this

essay. Let’s begin by looking at the advantages of

globalization

all around the

world

. One of the main positives of

this

concept is that it has the potential to make

this

world

a better place to live in and solve some of the deep-seated problems

such

as unemployment and poverty. What I mean by

this

is that

although

people are struggling to find a job in order to support their family members

some

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of the

world

, you have the chance to be employed and helps you supply your family with basic necessities like shelter, food and drinks.

Secondly

, there is cultural intermingling and each country is learning more about other

cultures

.

For instance

, during the early period of

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century

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there were a number of barriers

such

as tariffs,

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taxes and subsidies between nations which made it more difficult to export and import their products

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to country.

Nevertheless

, many states are supposed to unite so as to flourish their economies with the help of

globalization

. Turning to the other side of

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,

globalization

has led to exploitation

labor

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.

In other words

, when you want to run your own business, you need low salary workers to make your profit better rather than expansions. Take

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prisoners and children as an example, they are used to work inhumane conditions. Safety standards are ignored to reach the highest in

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world

. Another issue is that it can be difficult to keep national traditions and

cultures

alive. If they construct their own factory in other countries, they may try to bring their own

cultures

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time passes.

As a result

,

globalization

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unique

cultures

in these places and contributes to the development of a global village. In conclusion, even though it has got some drawbacks of spreading

globalization

, personally I believe the benefits in terms of economic growth and social opportunities outweigh any negatives.