A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they shouldhave the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy theirvarious needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Examine the arguments in favour of and against animal experiments, and come to a conclusion on this issue.

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humans
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people
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the feeling that they own whatever they want
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with them
, but other
people
started to say that
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type of behaviour is wrong.
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between animals
and
humans
and explains why there should be an equilibrium between the two.
On the other hand
,more and more
people
think that
animals
should not be exploited and
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that
then
they should be
treatedas
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treated as
treated
humans
, having the same rights.
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,
this
implies that
animals
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property, vote,or even decide over their own choices in life.
Nonetheless
, I tend to disagree with
this
argument,because
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animals don't
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own
a
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conscience
like ours,thereby they don't have the ability to think as
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humans
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does,
thus
they can
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not choose
who their
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leader
should be or how many acres of land they might need.
On the other hand
,others think that
animals
should be like slaves,and there should be no interdictions on what
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we can
do with them in order to satisfy our needs.
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Furthermore
,
this
means that we can use these other life forms just
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for our
well being.
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, using them for their meat and other foods they can produce
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research,
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like drug research
,or just other scientific projects that use
animals
as test subjects. In
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some
people
say that
animals
are at our disposal while others say that
this
kind of thinking is
wrongand
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wrong and
we should give them the same rights as
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some extent both parts are
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think
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that we
should have a respectful relationship and try to live them in a way that benefits both,
humans
and
animals
alike.
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