It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional cultures will be lost. It seems that we cannothave these two things together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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development .It would be far
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teenagers gradually forget traditional festival and
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that traditional
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side traditional
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some traditional knowledge which
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from grand generation .
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until they teach their
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.To sum up it seems that traditional
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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