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The maps below show changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times.

The maps below show changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times.
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The maps represent changes in
Castellon
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 over a twenty-year period from 2000 to 2022 In general, the main changes made to the area are the significant number of new public facilities, commercial places, and leisure centres available to the public. In 2000, the public facilities setup of
Castellon
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 was relatively standard. Apart from the train
station
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 and
city
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centre
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, the university in the north and the road in the south are the only public-based facilities that can be found, but
it
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this
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 has changed now. The
Castellon
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 has recently constructed a new train
station
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 and airport, despite not yet finished, to the north and north-east of the
city
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centre
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 and replaced the old train
station
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 with a new police
station
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.
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, a bike rental scheme and a tramline to the university in the
city
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centre
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 have been introduced, and cars have been banned on the road to make way for pedestrians, making the
place
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 more friendly to the public. A similar improvement
also
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 occurs in commercial places and leisure centres. At the beginning of the 20th century, the old market to the west of the
city
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centre
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is
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was
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 the only
place
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 for buying and selling. Now,
Castellon
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 has three: a new shopping
centre
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 to the north-east, a new covered market to the west, and a new shop in
place
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 of the initial market.
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, in 2000, no leisure activities could be found, but now, the previously empty port has been the
place
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 for
cinema
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cinemas
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and
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apply
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bars and clubs.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words castellon, station, city, centre, place with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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