A friend of yours is thinking of going on a campus holiday for the first time this summer. He / She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday - describe some possible disadvantages - say whether you would like to camping with your friend this summer Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses Begin your letter as follow: Dear….,
Dear Sam,
I want to say thank you for asking me for advice for the campus holiday
in
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this
summer, and I will give your positives and negatives of it so you can decide on it.
I know that you wanted to go on a campus holiday in summer but you didn’t get a chance for it. The best place for this
is Goa. I suggested it because there are so many adventurous sports and places available. On top of that, you can enjoy camping at Goa’s beach where you will stay full of the night with your friends.
There are some drawbacks as well which should also
be known by you. It is very expensive and the market which is near to it is more expensive as well, therefore
, you should not buy from that place. Another thing is if you want to purchase anything, you will have to go far from that at around 5kms so you should also
take care of it.
I also
want to come with you in
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this
summer because I will complete my work by that time. It has been 7 years having been there and I want to feel relaxed so wait for me for this
trip.
It’ll be great to catch up again soon.
See you soon.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite