All children should learn to speak a foreign language as soon as they start school.’ How far do you agree with this proposal? How important is it for a child to learn a foreign language?

When
children
begin to go to school, they should learn to speak a foreign
language
. It seems to me that learning a second
language
is not proper for students who study in elementary school. There are some reasons for
this
. The main reason would appear to be learners who study
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language
could be pressure on them, especially
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children
.
Therefore
,
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language
can be
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valuable than the foreign
language
. If pupils systematically study
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language
, they can
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learn other languages.
Secondly
, the
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language
could be extinct when those learners combine to speak
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two languages. There is a painful lesson from philiphine which is that those who are forgotten and unable to speak their
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language
.
This
means that the country’s culture and
language
will die.
Finally
, elementary students might be stressed out because of their first lessons
such
as mathematics,
language
courses etc.
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children
will frustrated by learning
new
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language
thus
we have to leave choice them to choose
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their own. Honestly, I agree with those who are willing to speak foreign languages
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their
children
.
However
,
this
idea gives
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reduction on
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language
. In
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, it seems that
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of
original
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language
,
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burden
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foreign
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in elementary school.
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