Some people feel that boarding schools (where students or pupils live at the school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons.
It is often said that children benefit from boarding schools, especially student’s
today’s
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in today’s
technology focused
world. Add a hyphen
technology-focused
However
, those have a two-way position in that question. This
essay will discuss the debate, and give a concluding view. On the one hand, those who support the parents
of dormitory’s
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dormitory
students
cite various benefits that the activity can bring to pupils. These range from learning to make
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making
decision
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decisions
by
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on
For example
, managing study time
for academic achievements and become
a private organization to improve ability. Another argument is the emotional support that Wrong verb form
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students
live in accommodation, meaning that the pupil feel
freedom and more responsibility. Change the verb form
feels
By contrast
, opponents of this
view point out that not all students
live in dormitory
of school. Examples can be seen in some countries, where Add an article
the dormitory
may be
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maybe
students
don’t
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aren’t
interest
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interested
to live
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in living
dormitory
. In Add an article
a dormitory
the dormitory
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students
live in comfortable home
with lovely family environments to create a warm situation. For these families, Fix the agreement mistake
homes
parents
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to children
children
safety with having a good Change noun form
children's
time
and unforgettable memories. Finally
, it must be said that not all students
want to live in school boarding, because their interests prefer to
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are
differently
so their Change the word
different
parents
opinion spend more time
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on internet
waste
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. Those control Fix the agreement mistake
applications
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time
and researching
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moreover
their success of
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in
caused
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is caused
management
of Correct article usage
the management
parents
. Overall
, it seems that the decision to live in dormitory
should be based onAdd an article
a dormitory
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the
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interests
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abilities
environments
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environment
especially
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, especially
students
effect
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affect
on
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apply
parents
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parents'
parent's
discussion
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discussions
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
