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It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional cultures will be lost. It seems that we cannothave these two things together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is claimed that technology is civilized day by day in recent years.
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that traditional
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 century, it is thought that as other innovations, manual works of traditional
culture
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by technology
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. It means some traditions do go out of fashion year by year.
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, many factories today
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ordinarily manufactured
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 it keeps
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 rather than classical
culture
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 visual displays. Long years ago, teachers had to use chalks and
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 to explain themes clearly, but, nowadays, because of
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, among with there are videos
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manufacturing
 products by using
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machines
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 example, in fashion industries, experts admire hand-made dresses when they award fashion designers for it.Because it is known that
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 of productivity and
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revolutionary
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,
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