Some believe it is the responsibility of government to take care of the environment, others think people are responsible for it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In today's world, the
environment
neglected is the main man-made action which possibly leads to a huge volume of issues in the future. It may say that this
should belong to the government
's responsibility, however
, others claim that it is more people
side that has to take care of it. Even though both
sides contain reasonable evidence, I believe that this
issue requires assistance from both
government
and ordinary people
and we will explain now.
With regards to the government
's potential, putting such
issues on their hands could be more effective because of the ability to create laws, as well as reliable scientific information and solutions. For instance
, laws created by the government
are comprehensive in that it is covered all citizen's actions. This
leads to more effective and strict rules about the environment
in society. Furthermore
, as it is more connection between government
and authorities the scientific merits about the environment
could be easily utilized by the government
to create solutions and processes.
However
, the only response from the government
may not be successful if it lacks people
's reaction. To clarify, ordinary citizens' action mainly affects the long-term cure of the environment
more than the government
. Car and other electric equipment usages (for example
) cannot be fewer by only the government
's hands but mainly depend on every citizen.
In conclusion, even though the laws and comprehensive information will make government
easily cope with environmental problems, it is rather excessive to state that the responsibilities of such
people
are unprofitable. Because of that, it can not lack both
sides of support in terms of taking care of the environment
. In the long run, if the environments are taken care of by both
Sides of people
properly, fewer problems could appear in society.Submitted by littlesenile on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
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- moreover
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- therefore
- however
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