A magazine wants to include contribution from its readers for an article called 'the book that influenced me most". Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influences you most. In your letter, •describe what this book was about, •explain how this book influenced you, •say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

missive to let you know that I have recently read an

article

by the name of"the

book

that influenced me most" from the Time Now magazine.As the

article

was all about the struggles a student faces in their career.

Hence

,it is beneficial for all the adolescents to read the complete

article

as it not only provides strength to tackle several issues but

also

it develops the reader's mind as there were plentiful ideas in the

article

. Let me explain my scenario,I was filled with negative thoughts whenever I was not able to achieve my tasks which leads to anxiety and depression.But,after leading the complete

article

every time a bad feeling arises in my mind it gets automatically converted into a positive feeling.

Besides

this

book

taught me how to work on my weak areas. I would definitely recommend

this

book

to my several friends who are demotivated because of the activities they are not able to achieve and I am sure it will help them a lot and it will drastically make a positive change in them.It is an undeniable fact that

this

book

is a blessing for the youngsters as well as for the people who have their left hope. I am looking forward to reading more books like

this

in the coming future. Yours sincerely, Haman

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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