In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

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. Tiredness effort is emphasized by some nations in order to catch all of dreams and willing of

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dynamic and hopeful about acquiring aims. Provided that, parents and authorities insist extensively on

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of nurturing

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of all kinds of achievement

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strict try will be elaborate. In terms of learning that permanent attempting is the key

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hitting every

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. It might play an encouraging role to keep pushing and not give up by any sparkle of defeat. Due to that, the whole society would be more proactive, which increases the chance of progressing.

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, India

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been developed in economical features and science despite

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the massive population owing to

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collective thinking system. The more crucial benefit could be the general influence of persistence, which prevent being pleased in

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Therefore

, if

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assume they are able to achieve everything, probably would make effort to solve their personal and social problems

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passively

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might cause

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start unrelated adventures that can waste

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's energy.

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the real skill would not flourish. To make an example, if a child

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inherited talented in arts-based subjects by trusting to trying as an enough means to be an engineer or doctor he can be frustrated about catering his needs and even lose the chance of

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as an innovate or renowned artist.

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have been taught to neglect their confined abilities and have

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unrealistic hopes to occupy anything they want just by working. In

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telling

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that they are unrestricted capable of meeting any desire with

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attempt have some advantages like shaping them eager hard-workers is visible.

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, they should be learned to think in a rational way about reality in order to dedicate their

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towards setting some goals which

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fit to them.