in the future nobody will y printed newspaper aur books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying agree or disagree

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crucial part of every person life.it is often argued that in the near future folk prefer reading online all their materials like
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and
books
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always required their study material in their hands. To embark on,public built de rahe bit of reading due to the physical availability of
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they enjoy reading
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in the morning with their
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.
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people don't want to go online for any news and articles, because of their daily habit of reading material by holding in hand.
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once said in their interview with BBC
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,that, he always read
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progress far from the city in their home near
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one of the biggest joint in
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technology
also
like to read
books
and
newspaper
with physical context.
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,
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are well educated about
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of screen timing on our eyes and brain.various types of online content
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not work in children and when they go online for watching some educational content they encountered
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adult content and caused many personality disorders.
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, there are 37% of
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population are infected with retina and eye disease.
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to spend
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the most time
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reading
books
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will lead to youth towards success . To conclude,
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is well educated and very conscious about their health and they prefer to choose physical material to read rather than spending important time on
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