in the future nobody will why printed newspaper aur books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.to what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the era of modernization, Technology become a very crucial part of every
person
life. it is often argued that in the near future folk prefer reading online all their materials like newspapers and books rather than reading physical copies I completely disagree with Change noun form
person's
this
opinion and think that the masses always required
their study material in their hands.
To embark on , the public built their habit of reading Wrong verb form
require
due to
the physical availability of books and newspapers and they enjoy reading newspapers in the morning with their first tea of the day.However
, people don't want to go online for any news and
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or
article
because of their daily habit of reading material by holding Fix the agreement mistake
articles
in
hand. Correct pronoun usage
it in
This
habit gives them a sense of fulfilment. For example
, Bill Gates once said in their
interview with BBC News that he always read the book when they required Change the word
an
for
their business and self-development progress far from the city in their home near a forest. Change preposition
apply
That is
why one of the biggest giants in technology also
like
to read Correct subject-verb agreement
likes
statement
and Fix the agreement mistake
statements
newspaper
with physical context.
Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
Secondly
, Nowadays , nations are well educated about the effects of screen timing on our eyes and brain.various type
of online content Fix the agreement mistake
types
is
not for children and when they go online Correct subject-verb agreement
are
for watching
Change preposition
to watch
some
educational content they Correct quantifier usage
apply
encountered
adult content Wrong verb form
encounter
and
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which
cause
many personality disorders. Correct subject-verb agreement
causes
For instance
, in the USA,there are 37% of the young population are infected with retina and eye disease. Thus
, it is important to aware future generations to
spend Fix the infinitive
apply
their
most time reading reports , which will lead youth toward success.
Correct pronoun usage
apply
To conclude
, the public is well educated and very conscious about their health and they prefer to choose physical material to read rather than spending important time on the internet .Submitted by bikramrahi97 on
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task response
Your essay addresses the prompt adequately by presenting arguments against the idea that people will prefer online reading in the future. However, ensure to clearly state your stance in the introduction.
coherence cohesion
You have a good overall structure with a clear introduction and conclusion. Use topic sentences in each paragraph to improve coherence further.