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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Students should learn which is an interesting
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, some
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 think that the
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 is an essential opportunity which they should choose subjects which they can use in the
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. In the following paragraphs, a reason to support my opinion will be outlined.
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 steady
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 are an essential goal in many
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, learning, what they like, creates
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joy during working
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 as working as an artist which
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 think is a freelance
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 and an unsteady
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 for working in long term.
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,
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job
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 in
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 thinks have a lower income than other
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 which they do not like.
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, some countries have cultural thinking which parents want their children to study in the field
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, doctor, engineering and other steady
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 Nowadays, the world has developed in many ways,
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, science and technology. So
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 an idea that humans will be replaced by robots in
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, many
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 will plan for study in the connect
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 with the science and technology
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 as engineering, data analytic and other related subjects
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 The studying of these subjects will guarantee the
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 in the
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, so
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 is the reason why many
people
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 should study with the useful
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. In conclusion, studying which they like a
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 is important to a mind of them but they want to think about the
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 by aiming the goal which is the achievement in the
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 it makes them less money, it creatures
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happiness for them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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