Some people think it is important to spend time in developing a successful career while others think it is more importany to spend time with family and friends. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Part of the community opines, hard-working on the carrier is the most important while , another part believes spending
life
with relatives and close people
should be the first
priority . Objectives of the carrier can get fruitful at any time
of life
,although
, spending time
with children and close friends
can be missed for a lifetime. Due to these reasons , I reckon we should spend our time
with our close ones as far as possible rather than hard working on the job
which can be done at any time
.
when we consider about most working people
around the world, they having a good family environment. Most importantly ,Good support from the family is a must for successful employment. At the same time
, working people
should think about their family and friends
who waste a lot of time
for them . For example
, I am a busy doctor working for my postgraduate for the last
5 years. I spend very little time
with my family and friends
during the last
5 years .Now I realized how important to spend with family and friends
since I feel I am isolated .
On the other hand
, a Successful carrier can be achieved at any time
. most people
around the world first
raised their family and later think about their career. For instance
, A friend of my university had married at the age of 25. later he had 2 children before 30y.Ultimately, he started his post-graduate training at the age of 45y when his children are in university. Later he became a consultant and now lives a good life
.
In conclusion, Although
some people
belives in being hard-working in an occupation instead
of spending a good time
with family and friends
, I believe we should prioritise our family rather than a job
. This
can be proven by many examples which include good satisfaction when spending life
with family and friends
rather than on job
and , job
satisfaction can get at any age. Therefore
I suggest to the government , to promote people
to spend a good time
with their family rather than their jobs.Submitted by mngldissanayaka on
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