Some people think it is important to spend time in developing a successful career while others think it is more importany to spend time with family and friends. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Part of the community opines, hard-working on the carrier is the most important while , another part believes spending
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with relatives and close
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should be the
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priority . Objectives of the carrier can get fruitful at any
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of
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,
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, spending
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with children and close
friends
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can be missed for a lifetime. Due to these reasons , I reckon we should spend our
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with our close ones as far as possible rather than hard working on the
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which can be done at any
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. when we consider about most working
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around the world, they having a good family environment. Most importantly ,Good support from the family is a must for successful employment. At the same
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, working
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should think about their family and
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who waste a lot of
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for them .
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, I am a busy doctor working for my postgraduate for the
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5 years. I spend very little
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with my family and
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during the
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5 years .Now I realized how important to spend with family and
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since I feel I am isolated .
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, a Successful carrier can be achieved at any
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. most
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around the world
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raised their family and later think about their career.
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, A friend of my university had married at the age of 25. later he had 2 children before 30y.Ultimately, he started his post-graduate training at the age of 45y when his children are in university. Later he became a consultant and now lives a good
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. In conclusion,
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some
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belives in being hard-working in an occupation
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of spending a good
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with family and
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, I believe we should prioritise our family rather than a
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.
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can be proven by many examples which include good satisfaction when spending
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with family and
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rather than on
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and ,
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satisfaction can get at any age.
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I suggest to the government , to promote
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to spend a good
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with their family rather than their jobs.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prioritize
  • strike a balance
  • ambitious
  • dedicated
  • work-life balance
  • career-oriented
  • professional success
  • financial stability
  • personal fulfillment
  • contribute
  • supportive
  • cherish
  • bond
  • memorable
  • experience
  • social connections
  • commitment
  • advocate
  • sacrifice
  • juggle
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