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In the past when students pursued a University degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunities to study abroad.

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In the past when students pursued a University degree, they tended to
study
 in their own
country
. Nowadays, they have more opportunities to
study
 abroad. In
this
 modern time that we are living in, education become incredibly important. Many believe that without studying there is no chance to have an appropriate career so being well educated is crucial nowadays. I like to elaborate merits and demerits of
this
 argument and
thus
 get to a logical conclusion
such
 as the benefits and drawbacks that
this
 point of view will have for society and
also
 individuals
Initially
, people used to
study
 in their own city or
country
 and go to local university whereas
this
 day they keen to immigrate and go to a foreign
country
 and go to famous and high ranking universities. Many believe that studying abroad has many virtues
such
 as staying and living in another
country
 permanently.
Moreover
, studying in another
country
 could be beneficial too
likewise
 they can get a scholarship and save money and
also
 get a good career that may could not possible in their own
country
.
On the other hand
, when the young generation immigrates for
further
 education, the nation loses the capable and intelligent group of people.
This
 could have detrimental consequences that are never able to modify.
Hence
, society becomes more seniors and old generation that have to confront with enormous obstacles whereas they do not have potential and
this
 lead to erosion the
country
 and nation.
Furthermore
, when people immigrate to another
country
, it may lead to isolation and depression.
Thus
, If they had known that they would have been confronted with
such
 a huge issue , they would change their decision. To conclude, I reiterate that
this
 argument has its pros and cons
although
 sometimes there is no choice for many to stay in their own
country
 and
study
 in their hometown.
This
 decision may affect society and our families that we should aware of both sides of merits and demerits.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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