People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who change jobs frequently.
Nowadays, many people tend to choose to take a professional job in their
career
lives to get a satisfying working experience
. On the other hand
, there are also
some people who have an argument that changing jobs regularly can avoid boredom at work. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the first
statement that deciding to take a job in early career
and keep it well will make our work experience
more deeply.
Firstly
, I believe that starting our professional career
earlier can give some benefits like increasing our knowledge and experience
. Moreover
, the more knowledge and experience
we get, the more possibility to be satisfied we get. For example
, our Central Bank Governor, Mr Perry Warjiyo, actually started to work at Bank Indonesia when he was graduated from college. Furthermore
, he also
said that working at Bank Indonesia from a lower level and trying to achieve a top-level was a good experience
for him as he could get a satisfying of strengthening his knowledge. So, it is important to us that if we want to get a satisfying of working, we could start to take a career
path earlier.
Secondly
, the earlier we start our career
, the more we get connections
in our professional life. In my opinion, it’s very related that if we involve in a specific working area for a long time, we can enhance our connections
much more. For example
, a professional banker who works more than 10 years has a
possibility to have more relationships than a professional banker who works under 10 years. Correct article usage
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Thus
, starting our professional jobs at an early time could have more connections
and lead us to get a satisfying working.
In conclusion, although
some people prefer to change their jobs to get more experience
, I believe that building a professional career
in a long time will be more satisfying because we can get many benefits and enhance our connections
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