Write a letter to your local council about the state of the sport club facilities and request more facilities suitable for people of your age. - Describe your sport club facilities. - What facilities are required? - Explain why people of your age need these facilities.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to draw your attention to the sports facilities which are lacking in our city. Recently I have shifted to

this

wonderful city with my family, but to ,surprise I came to know that there is not big stadium available in the city, which provide a variety of sporting facilities under a single roof. I think the development of a stadium is vital for the proper development of the people living here. I am a national level hockey player and working in the public sector under sports quota and most of the time I keep on travelling. But when I will be at home it will be difficult for me to practice. So if a stadium is opened , I along with other youngsters can ripe the benefit and may make the country proud at the international level. Apart from

this

, because of these people can

also

stay fit and healthy. Hope you will consider my request. Yours faithfully, Vardan

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Some people believe it is essential to include physical education classes in the curriculum for all school-age children. Others think that children's time is better spent on more academics subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Environmental damage is a problem in most countries. What is the cause of this damage? What should be done about this problem?

Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mible phones for communication has a negative effect on young people's reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Others believe that there are health benefits of living in cities Discuss bth views and give your own opinions