Write a letter to your local council about the state of the sport club facilities and request more facilities suitable for people of your age. - Describe your sport club facilities. - What facilities are required? - Explain why people of your age need these facilities.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to draw your attention to the sports facilities which are lacking in our city. Recently I have shifted to

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wonderful city with my family, but to ,surprise I came to know that there is not big stadium available in the city, which provide a variety of sporting facilities under a single roof. I think the development of a stadium is vital for the proper development of the people living here. I am a national level hockey player and working in the public sector under sports quota and most of the time I keep on travelling. But when I will be at home it will be difficult for me to practice. So if a stadium is opened , I along with other youngsters can ripe the benefit and may make the country proud at the international level. Apart from

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, because of these people can

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stay fit and healthy. Hope you will consider my request. Yours faithfully, Vardan

mad143sreeMon Feb 07 2022

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Write a letter to your local council about the state of the sport club facilities and request more facilities suitable for people of your age. - Describe your sport club facilities. - What facilities are required? - Explain why people of your age need these facilities.

There has been a debate on whether we should let everyone have access on any data as much as we can in different subjects such as science related articles and research,economy

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