University education should be free for all students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Education should be free for all students when it is related to educational institutions.
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, in my ,opinion I agree with Linking Words
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Higher education definitely should be free for all Linking Words
admission
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,opinion I highly agree with Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
statement since not everyone has the financial power to join a college. Linking Words
For example
, many individuals have a hard life where they barely achieve a level of discipline that allows them to join a college. The reason for Linking Words
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due to
their lack of monetary privilege that makes it almost impossible for them to join a university. Linking Words
For example
, if universities were free there Linking Words
were
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would be
to finish
their elementary education Change preposition
into finishing
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leveraging
their personal development.
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Nevertheless
, the most significant advantage of having a free university tuition charge for all students is that it can not only improve the local economy but Linking Words
also
make the individual's life who did the graduation much better. Linking Words
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universities
tuition were free and there Fix the agreement mistake
university
had
an effort by the local authorities for them to finish their degree many positive things could happen Verb problem
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decrease Correct article usage
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in
as well as
a stock of minds that could help the government to improve the local economy by allocating them strategically in the long term.
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although
the majority of universities are paid and hard for poor students to join it could positively change the local economy if implemented for free. The result of Linking Words
this
could bring an excellent impact for the person who joined and finished their graduation Linking Words
as well as
for their family and community.Linking Words
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