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Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem

#children #lifestyle #schools #parents
Nowadays a considerable amount of
children
 have an unhealthy life way. the education system and parents have to make attempt to solve
this
 problem. Childhood is the most important life period which we must try to enlarge some fruitful habits. There is no doubt that one of them is
the
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 healthy lifestyle. It seems that
children
's lifestyle has been literally changed.
In particular
, parents because do not have enough time don't care about it.
Hence
, scion and teenagers waste plenty of time for an unusual
job
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such
 as
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playing digital games and sitting on
chair
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.
Additionally
, they gain a lot of calories without
practicing
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 actively. Based on fact, over
this
 decade offspring have been wasting plenty of their own time on social networks and they have done less exercise
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than
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that
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than
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 what they did over the past twenty years.
Moreover
, not only they have been becoming fattier but
also
 some diseases related to overweight have expanded among them.
Furthermore
, in the past
children
 used to eat
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homemade cooking more than they do now.
Thus
, they gain
less
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 calories and more fruitful nutrients which cause them to be healthy. Another factor affecting
children
life style
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lifestyle
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 is the consumption
junk
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 food with trans- oil. Particularly, junk food is
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 impact on hearth's performance. A great deal of importance is educating to use less
high calorie
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 snacks could reduce
consuming
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 of them especially if it does with teachers.
For example
, teaching about
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healthy food like fruits or whole-grain
breads
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 and homemade cooking could encourage
children
 to use them more. In conclusion, if these manners continued
children
 would become unhealthier.
Hence
, teachers and parents have to help each other to tackle
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 problem.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unhealthy lifestyle
  • growing concern
  • crucial role
  • addressing this issue
  • promote healthy habits
  • educational programs
  • physical activities
  • establish healthy routines
  • nutritious meals
  • collaboration
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