Some companies sponsor sports as a way to adverties themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The opinion is divided on whether businesses should advertise themselves via sports sponsorship or not.

Although

some people suggest

otherwise

,

however

, I believe that financing competitive games

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greater benefits.

This

essay will discuss both views in detail followed by a reasoned conclusion

thereafter

.

To begin

with, giving financial support to games in other to gain popularity might not achieve the desired effect.

As a result

of the varying

interest

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interests

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of the public in different entertainment events, marketing might not achieve its ultimate goal if the majority of the target population

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not keen on the particular event.

For example

, the advertising of junk foods by a football team will probably not yield popularity since the group of people it focuses on are children who hardly have an interest in soccer.

Thus

, leading to poor broadcasting and waste of resources.

On the other hand

, marketing and financial aid have mutual benefits in

this

regard as both partners gain from each other.

Accordingly

, when firms put in the budget for sports, more money is available to care for

players

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welfare and purchase suitable training equipment, at the same time the

organisations'

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organisations

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profit at their end by increasing

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awareness.

For instance

, statistics have shown that major clubs run by support groups and the government achieve greater success than the ones that receive monetary assistance from the authorities alone.

Therefore

, financing competitive games should be encouraged as both parties gain eventually from each other. In conclusion, controversy still exists on whether enterprises should stop aiding sports because of the poorly targeted group, but I believe that when properly directed, it will improve them a lot.