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You recently went a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter, Say how you felt about his performance give details of your musical activities explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

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Dear sir, I am for
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Last
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me soon and you give me some suggestions about It please call me on
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 number 687544. Your Truly
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • stellar performance
  • captivating
  • musical prowess
  • talent
  • repertoire
  • collaboration
  • mentorship
  • resonate
  • aspiring musician
  • composition
  • rendition
  • inspirational
  • vocal range
  • harmonize
  • skillset
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