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Some people are of the opinion that being highly qualified is the only way to ensure a well-paying job. While others believe that having work experience is the best way to get a well-paying job. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Education is an asset in today's era. Few communities believe that being highly educated is the only
way
 to get a great opportunity in
respective
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 fields.
However
, others think only work
experience
 is the best
way
 to get a handsome salary. I believe that you need to have field
experience
 rather than a highly qualified education. In
this
 essay, I will discuss both sides and try to withdraw my opinion.
Firstly
, education is the basic foundation for getting a wealthier and healthier life.
Moreover
, an academic
carrier
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career
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 helps people to get
their
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the
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 desired job for which they are dreaming
about
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apply
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.
For example
, Mukesh Ambani, a business tycoon has pursued his
masters
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master's
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 in
the
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business and he
got
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has had
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 immense success in his industry. He is India's richest man and the world's 10th richest man.
Lastly
, qualification is the key to success.
On the other hand
, work
experience
 plays a crucial role in getting high wages.
Furthermore
, if a candidate applies for a new job, the first question from the HR department is related to job
experience
.
For instance
,
bill gates
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Bill Gates
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 is a college dropout student, but
due to
 his dedication and hustle he became the master of Microsoft and took out the revolution in the computer industry
due to
 that we can make
the
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apply
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presentation
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presentations
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 and operate computers easily. There are a plethora of examples of people like Elon Musk, the Telsa and SpaceX owner, and Warren
buffet
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. So, working in a particular technology for a long time is the
way
 to get high salaries. To summarise, both have their benefits, but I believe that being an academic more
topnotch
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top-notch
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 is the definitive
way
 to get seven-figure salaries.
Submitted by Dhaval S Patel on

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task response
Include a clear thesis statement in the introduction to outline your opinion on the topic.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph is logically structured and flows smoothly from one point to the next.
task response
Provide more specific examples and evidence to support your arguments.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Highly qualified
  • Well-paying job
  • Securing
  • Knowledge
  • Expertise
  • Higher positions
  • Higher salaries
  • Practical skills
  • Real-world setting
  • Employers value
  • Professional connections
  • Ideal
  • Industry
  • Job role
  • Opinion
  • Experience
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