universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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the one hand, in developing countries, equality between

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issue for years.

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of women who get high education is lower than men because of

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as opportunity and culture. Giving the proportional quota will give

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more chances to enter the

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and can increase their quality of life.

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in Indonesia tend to work and married after they finish high school because they have difficulties

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equal numbers of

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could

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equality.

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must allow fair competition between ladies and

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gentlemen

to prove their ability.

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between them should not be regulated to create fair competition. Women and men may show their ability, so scholar who

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the

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is the best ones regardless of their

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in Indonesia give proportion for

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in high school can not join them.

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without

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their ability. In conclusion, though

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number of

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have negative

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like there will be unfair enrollment between them, I think have good

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more

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for

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a female

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to get high education to increase their quality of life.