Q: Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity. How far do you share this viewpoint?

There is a point that those who work should donate money

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their salary to charity. It seems that not an appropriate idea for everybody, and I will explain the reasons in the essay.

Firstly

, all people might not need to donate a fixed amount of their salary.

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is not

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than

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their life problems,

such

as paying house

fee

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fees

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and electricity

fee

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, etc.

Therefore

, the government has to work on

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regulation of charitable donations by giving several options

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based on their capacity. A second negative factor is the lack of financial ability of the population.

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results in people’s focus are not on supporting charity because of the unstable economic system which can increase

unemployed

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and poor society, especially in developing countries.

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, there is a

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belief

of

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between

donater

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donation

and charity.

However

, some charities could not show

authentical

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results and respect.

This

destroys their passion to contribute

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this

activity. It is true that there are some benefits of donation which are supporting children, people, and animals with

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adverse

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, and other difficulties. Despite

this

, it appears that those who can donate money already built

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his

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stable

career

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and

life

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like

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people, especially when compared with the public.

To conclude

, charitable donations might not

proper

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for everybody to donate an amount of their income

due to

living issues, financial capacity, and society.