Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.

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with

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trying new

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are excellent for humans, especially in today's

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world, whereas there are numerous peoples who prefer to still reside in their comfort zone.

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essay will discuss the debate

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and give my concluding view. On the one hand, those who want to try new

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ranges from exotic foods to know many languages,

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there are many opportunities to make relationships with different kinds of human beings and discern dissimilar sceneries related with the

places

they visit.

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, in today's modern world, numerous souls know several

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internet

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, in many cases, they easily communicate with foreigners and know the cultures of their countries and famous foods.

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, it

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appear

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that if they visit

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other

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, they realize how the world is beautiful.

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, Botanic Garden in Singapore

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contrasting varieties of plant species.

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that not all individuals live in a situation

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unbound to try new

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majority of the cases, some persons do not have

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their comfort zone where they lived all over the period. After

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they are afraid of being dangerous and do not know how to communicate because of different kinds of languages.

Finally

, the most important

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they reject to try new

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of political rules. If they do not know the other countries regulations, they would fund money.

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, In Singapore, there are not allowed to eat on

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or

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. Overall, it is logical to conclude that there have

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advantages related to the person's interests, mind conditions, expense and circumstances of the

places

where they want to go.

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, it would appear that trying new

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are more convenient for the reason that there are many possibilities to test the most

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foods and know

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large number of

places

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