Many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisitaion. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

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Job is an essential need of all
people
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to survive. A job provides human beings to earn money and maintain their lives through these earnings. Choosing how to earn a living is not an easy decision and affects one’s whole life. Whether working for another
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or being self-employed both have advantages and disadvantages. Entrepreneurship involves more monetary gains and
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while giving more
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and workload; while working for firms contains less risk and constant salary while giving less investment chance and less
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. Setting up a new
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gives more monetary gains for entrepreneurship and
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provides more
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and freedom.
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starting a
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,
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can build their dream
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and earn much more money than being a White collar.
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or women to make an investment and gives them more freedom with their expenses and hobbies. In Turkey average job owner’s monthly gains are equal to three or four times of a worker who works for minimum wage.
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while spending
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hobbies or other personal expenses.
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being an employer needs more responsibility and more
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. At the
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growing steps of a
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, employers sometimes even work more than their employees, since they are the owner they need to take
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responsibility instinctively and work hard.
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of the high responsibility and workload
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will be more than the regular employee of an organization. Employers can not suddenly say ı resign and leave since that workplace is like their home.
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, building a
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needs
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capital and most of the society take credits from banks and
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leads to high risk from the point of enterprenureships. These are adverse sides of being a
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starter.
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conclusion, setting up a
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can be attractive and provide
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doing their own schedule, they can spend more than
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average person, gives a chance to do longer holidays, they do not give an account to anybody but
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all these good sides employers have much more
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than their employees.
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are more sophisticated enough to start their own company, they often lack the knowledge of how to manage the budget. They have to control the finance of the
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and make the organization smooth like a working impeller. So setting up a
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has trade-offs and it is not a bird in the hand.
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