in the future nobody will why printed newspaper aur books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There are numerous persons who utilize the internet especially in today's technology-focused world,

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affects the

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of physical

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and books.It seems to me that the above intention is not accurate for all facts, and I will explain why in

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, there are still a large number of human beings who

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read

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the

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every morning as their habits.Another argument is that news and facts that were written

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the papers are more absolute compared to online.Examples can be seen in the political announcements which are described as the major report in

newspapers

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words have mistakes,

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may be even prosecuted.

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, information from printed paper like

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lawful.

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range from the declarations of abandonment from parents to the death announcements.

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is not to say that the scoops from social media are not always mistaken, there

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part of correct articles. While it may be corrected that it would appear that generally speaking, human beings easily

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tidings in

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they want.It seems appears to be the case,

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, that in many cases, the blue light from phone screen affects individuals eyesight,

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which causes

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several eye diseases, whereas the paper

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not have side effects related

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eyes. To conclude, reading from

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and books acquire countless advantages like

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apply

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rightness, habits, lawfulness and so on, while online do not have

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facts.

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physical papers.

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