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Today more and more tourist are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places.

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Nowadays, The number of tourists who are choosing to travel to strange
places
such
 as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic has incredibly increased during the
last
 few years. Going to these kinds of
places
 has its advantages and its disadvantages. I personally believe that it has more benefits than its drawbacks. On one hand, People who want to travel to these special
places
 are adventurous and kind of brave Because being
in
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there is not a simple thing to do. Travelling to different
places
 brings you plenty of new experiences and lots of excitement.
For example
, you can see a variety of animals that can't find anywhere else like polar bears in the Antarctic Which you can just see
them
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in
this
 area.
Moreover
, being in
such
 areas which have different climates from other parts of the planet can
teaches
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 you how to survive in a hard situation and bad weather.
For instance
, in the Sahara Desert ,which is one of the driest and hottest regions in the world, the average temperature
isover
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is over
over
 40 Celsius
degree
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 in the summer and it is extremely hot and tough to be there.
Also
, you can see how people live there and
meet
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 new people
with
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 different cultures can raise your awareness
from
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 the world you are living
.
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On the other
hand
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 we can not deny its drawbacks and hardness of staying there. Unfortunately, many individuals go to these
places
 alone and without any experience of being in tough conditions.
Hence
, they will face lots of dangerous situations. As an example, a person who has travelled to Everest knows how to stay in the cold weather and he/she is less likely to stuck in a trouble. So, an unskillful person will be in
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serious danger of diseases by the weather conditions.
Additionally
, there are many dangerous animals that we don't even know them.
Thus
, travelling with a tour guide is the best choice for tourists who don't have enough experience of travelling. To sum up ,being in
places
 which have hard situations can bring you lots of joy and pleasure plus other benefits it has.
Also
 before your travel ,you need to consider its drawbacks too.
However
, I strongly believe the advantages outweigh
its
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 disadvantages.
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