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Do the advantages of government spending their money on college and university fees for student outweigh the disadvantage?

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A discussion about education and costs related has always been
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permeative and immanent between intellectuals. Some politicians encourage the governmental financial cover for the university syllabus results in a positive impact while others against that to save the budget .
However
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 in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary. am in great accord with the former ideology and the reason for my opinion will be elucidated in the forthcoming paragraphs. On one side of
this
 argument , I believe in the precious adage: that learning is like air and water we must process it rather than
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 it .
Hence
 the decision-makers in each country must allocate a certain amount of the budget to ensure full cover for all education processes even though by securing some resources for that purpose from other support like adding more taxes for certain businesses . Stepping out from our comfort zone is risky , in ,contrast it will
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 us to think outside the box and think
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 the positive impact of
this
 attitude.
on the other hand
,Some people cannot afford the school expenses
however
 their offspring was very clever and intelligent.
Hence
,they will direct them to work to support them in their fight against life expenses. ,
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 we will lose a new active and brilliant generation.
Hence
 conclusively , the learning process is very precious
furthermore
 the government responsibility is to carry over
this
 task , similar to health and national security.
In addition
, if the parliament
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this
 task to the people surely they will not consider it.
Hence
 negative impact and more developing countries will arise.
Firstly
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 process is very important and in ,contrast we must give freedom for the students to enrol in
a private academies
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 or governmental as they will decide.
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