Fossil fuels have been the main driver of economic growth for the last 100 hundred years. Explain how fossil fuels have achieved this, outline the main problems their use causes, and suggest alternative solutions.

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according to people needs
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industrialisation
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development of
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they used different chemicals to make
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explain the causes of waste products released from
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needs and recent developments
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government
spend 80% funds on
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to increase their economic growth . They
also
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different countries so the exchange rate is higher as in
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the youth generation get jobs easily so they do not need to go overseas for work and it will help
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to reduce the chances of
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illustration
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lots of problems
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as the waste material from organisations
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air and water pollution which
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higher and the new buildings were made.
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should need to give sufficient funds to mining industry people so that if any incident
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they should easily claim that money.
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will not
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urbanisation.
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, the products extracted after making any good things needs to be discarded in a proper way . In my profound opinion,
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fossils fuels have benefits but we cannot deny the drawbacks of
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. The overcome
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problem we need to take care of everything while using it without any harm to people and animals
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lives
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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