Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals.Others say that there are more important enviromental problems.

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Kingdom and
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. At
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person
in
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. But from
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in
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Sweden
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in Sweden iI as well as Italy in 1987 . In
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is the data in
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Sweden's
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get the
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as
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Sweden
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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