Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

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Marketing is becoming increasingly popular. It is considered

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some that advertisement informs us about the latest products, that help our life become easier.

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, others believe that it makes us buy unnecessary items.

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essay will discuss why advertisement is effective in making our lives easier. Many think that marketing has a strong influence on humans.

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can be

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distraction leading a person to buy an unnecessary product.

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that whenever she opens eBay, she gets influenced by the recommendation that pops up and tends to add them to the cart.

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is because of the pricing of these products. Ultimately, making her spend more and end up with useless products.

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recommendation at times can be good because they are educational. They provide information about the latest goods, which helps us to deal with a problem.

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a mechanical issue with my car on a road trip to Wollongong from Sydney, a billboard gave me information to contact emergency services.

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, when I was in need of a doctor, I was able to find one with

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of an advertisement. In Conclusion, buying commodities which we do not need is influenced by marketing

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others think these advertisements make our

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simple.

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essay discussed why it is important for the need of marketing. In my opinion, advertising can be a distraction at times but it is equally important to have advertisements as they educate the public in need of some service or an item.

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task response

Ensure to fully address all aspects of the essay question and provide a clear opinion throughout the essay.

coherence and cohesion

To improve coherence and cohesion, use linking words and phrases to connect ideas and ensure the introduction and conclusion clearly address the essay question.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

260 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

encourage
persuade
manipulative
unnecessary
excessive
artificial needs
desires
consumers
oversaturation
impulse buying
financial problems
inform
educate
features
benefits
innovations
raise awareness
social issues
positive behavior
enrich
well-being

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

Your opinion

Women should have an equal role alongside men in both police and armed forces. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many parts of the world, some famous people are considered ‘role models’, and they are having an increasing influence on the young. Is this a positive or negative development?

Rich countries often give financial aid to poor countries, but it does not solve the poverty, so some people think that rich countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than the financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?