Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

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Marketing is becoming increasingly popular. It is considered

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some that advertisement informs us about the latest products, that help our life become easier.

However

, others believe that it makes us buy unnecessary items.

This

essay will discuss why advertisement is effective in making our lives easier. Many think that marketing has a strong influence on humans.

This

can be

due to

distraction leading a person to buy an unnecessary product.

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, my friend

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that whenever she opens eBay, she gets influenced by the recommendation that pops up and tends to add them to the cart.

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her,

this

is because of the pricing of these products. Ultimately, making her spend more and end up with useless products.

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recommendation at times can be good because they are educational. They provide information about the latest goods, which helps us to deal with a problem.

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, when I

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a mechanical issue with my car on a road trip to Wollongong from Sydney, a billboard gave me information to contact emergency services.

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, when I was in need of a doctor, I was able to find one with

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of an advertisement. In Conclusion, buying commodities which we do not need is influenced by marketing

while

others think these advertisements make our

life

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simple.

This

essay discussed why it is important for the need of marketing. In my opinion, advertising can be a distraction at times but it is equally important to have advertisements as they educate the public in need of some service or an item.

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0Word repetition
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5Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

260 words

5.00

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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encourage
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unnecessary
excessive
artificial needs
desires
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oversaturation
impulse buying
financial problems
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benefits
innovations
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