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It seems to be an increasing trend towards assessing students through exams rather than assessment. What are the advantages and disadvantages of exams as a form of assessment?

#trend #students #exams #form
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Over the
last
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 decade, educational teaching trends for
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has been
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 changed significantly. It becomes
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easier to
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 access
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 through
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instead
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 of assessments. I will discuss more details about the advantages and disadvantages of
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 in
this
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 essay. I believe that there are many advantages of
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, one
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a
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simple fact
that
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 a student's ability can be seen through
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exam's
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result
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results
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. It can be said in another way that the
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what is
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the
weakness
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 of
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in
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which
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.
For instance
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, IELTS
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, people simply can judge the level of a student's English language ability by seeing their
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.
Secondly
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, an
exam
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 teaches the
students
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 that in order to get a good
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,
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proper preparation time is needed. It is an important lesson which
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 for our future.
By contrast
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, many believe that there are many forms of tests that will be faced in life but those would not be exactly like a school
exam
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. In some problems, teamwork and negotiation processes are required to solve certain problems.
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,
exams
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 provide only
a
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personal improvement. Those are not the only
accessing
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tool
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tools
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 to judge
students
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' abilities. It may lead to a negative effect and
give
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 huge pressure on
students
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' minds sometimes.
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, the
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 is a moment of truth to show their ability, sometimes even try
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 suicide because of their
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 outcome which is not the same as their expectation.
Furthermore
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,
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, sometimes raise the morale of fear that the bad
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 determines the life of
students
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.
This
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. There are plenty of examples to prove that some world-famous people had
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poor
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 in their childhood.
To sum up
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,
although
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are having
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 both advantages and disadvantages, in some countries,
exams
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 are still popular and increasingly
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 as a form of
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 assessment.
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