In many countries,the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main course of crime? How can we deal with those causes?
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, it is mainly due to illiterate families in countries and it will reduce with the help of the government
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expand industry administration, launch projects for the business person, so they will build industry and unemployed people will get jobs. Authority people should be strict with the rule so robbers will have fear of crime. Some kids nowadays share everything on social media Linking Words
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